Writing Prompts – Creative Copy Challenge #272
Posted: August 27, 2012 Filed under: Copy Challenges 85 CommentsOur own Justin Germino chose today’s words. In his own words:
This time in the Creative Copy Challenge, I am asking for entrants to put on their poetry hat and see if they can create a poem with the 10 words provided in this challenge. It can be rhyming, free form, multiple haikus, shadorma or any form you wish to write but let’s call it an additional challenge!
As I just released my first audio poetry volume on Wanderer Thoughts, I am also going to do a special and read aloud everybody’s poem entry and am willing to send it to you as a mp3 file just for fun.
If anyone is interested they can check out my first audio poetry volume which has 102 recorded audio tracks here:
http://www.wandererthoughts.com/buy-wanderer-thoughts-poetry/
This is a writing prompt. Bet you can’t do it! Take the 10 random words below and crush writer’s block by creating a cohesive, creative short story! And remember: after (if) you finish entering your submission into the comment field, highlight your words and click the bold button to make them stand out and help you determine if you forgot any words. (If you’ve missed previous writing prompts, we BET YOU CAN’T do those, either.)
- Rumination
- Determine
- Ostentatious – Pretentious display meant to impress others; boastful showiness
- Illogical
- Memory
- Cohorts
- Excess
- Timidly
- Notorious
- Admonishing
NOTE: Don’t copy and paste from MS Word. Use a program like notepad that removes formatting or just type in the comment field itself. Also, finish your submission, THEN bold the words. Thanks. (And don’t forget to tweet this and share it with your friends.)
Loved this. Did this one in under two minutes:
Glorious Ruminations
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It’s a rumi-nation; lots of open spaces.
Determined folks, ratting the races.
Ostentatious is such a waste.
Illogical with no taste.
Memories fill with determined grit
Cohorts, opportunities lost, and some bullshit
Excess time, can’t remember vividly
Hustle with no time to think timidly
Life is notorious
And admonishing … but glorious.
Great poem, what would you title it? I need a title so I can start recording.
@Shane, your poetry recording is also completed http://soundcloud.com/dragonblogger/glorious-ruminations-a-poem-by you can download it with the little button at the top and let me know what you think of my recording.
@Justin: Awesome what you are doing with all these poems. You’re the man!
This is beyond cool. Great poetry with a great voice adding life to it. Shane, you made this look effortless!
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@Shane-well done-Billy would be proud 🙂
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Timidly staring at nothing at all,
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A rumination and hope that words will fall.
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Determined to prove to Cohorts and not,
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A poetic side Liss Thomas has got!
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No ostentatious show or excess of words,
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But a memory admonishing harmonious cords
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Notorious for fantasy light and dark,
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Hard pressed to succumb to a rhythmic art.
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Admonishing doubt with an illogical smile,
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Poetic confection could take me awhile!
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@That was yummier than a hot fudge Sundae on Monday.
Thanks :)Â I’m sure the others will be deeper than mine 😉
I like your last line about life ‘admonishing . . but glorious’ The cherry on top!
What would you title this poem? Â I can’t wait to start recording it.
Oh boy, a title!
I would say either, ‘Poetry from Scratch’ or, like Shane said ‘Hot Fudge Sundae on Monday’Â
@Liss: Haha! Hot Fudge Sundae on Monday WOULD be a funny title, huh!
Okay Liss, your poem has been recorded you can listen to it here and there is a download button at the top so you can download and keep it http://soundcloud.com/dragonblogger/succumb-to-rhythmic-art-poem let me know what you thought of my reading of your poem.
How about “Succumb to Rhythmic Art” as the title?
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It was worth the wait, Liss! Now, you have no excuse for not adding ballads to the lips of your merry band and fantastical creatures.
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@Liss-you rhyming fool 🙂 Well done! 😉
I felt like this when I struggled with the prompt. I’m not much of a poet either, but you nailed this submission! My favorite line was “But a memory admonishing harmonious cords.”
Okay, leave titles for poems if you would, I would like to have each poem titles for the recording. Â
DEMONIC RAT
Determine where nutrition lies
Excess garbage, buzzing flies.
Memory on automatic
Ostentatious, emphatic
Notorious epicure.
Illogical to waste this food
Cohorts, come, and bring your brood!
Rumination, introspect
Admonishing this neglect
Timidly ask, “Won’t we get fat?”
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This was a wonderful surprise! Thanks for this super challenge, Justin!
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@Mitch: Splendid! To add an additional layer of difficulty as you did just puts this over the top cool. I love this community!
Thanks, Shane. I can’t wait to hear it.
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Enjoyed reading this one Mitch, the two non-rhyming lines threw me off a bit while recording but I think I added the pauses to make it sound great.  Let me know what you think, and like all the others you can click the download link and own the audio file at the top http://soundcloud.com/dragonblogger/demonic-rat-poem-by-michell
Justin, I enjoyed listening to it! This is too much fun.
I sweated over the non-rhyming lines, but it’s a technique I use when Acrostics split unevenly.
Your pauses were perfect. Thanks for the download!
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I thought it was a fun thing to do and raise awareness for my audio poetry which I have been doing for a while now and just put a volume together. Â Unfortunately the last few months I pay more per month to host my audio volume for sale than I was making in sales, so kind paying to keep it hosted.
You mean, even though you’re selling it from your site, you have to pay to keep the download available? Or do you just mean the usual hosting fees? If somebody is charging you up, maybe I can help? If you just need free server space, email me.
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The actual audio book is being hosted on e-Junkie.com which handles the transaction. Â I had no way to confirm purchases and allow download only if purchase confirmed if I hosted the files from my own WordPress site. So e-Junkie.com charges me $10 per month to host a product for sale there whether I make any sales or not, since I charge $3 for my 102 track audio poetry volume, I need to sell 4 per month to make a $2 profit over my $10 e-Junkie fee.
I have an inactive e-junkie account for that very reason. I switched to FastSpring. Vernessa Taylor told me about it and I’m very happy with it. No monthly fees! But they do take a % of each sale. You could also try Gumroad.com…
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I will look at these, one issue I had was the file sizes were too large (150mb for zip of 102 audio mp3 files) for most of the ones that offered free hosting and charged a fee at sale time.
@Justin: Do you use Audacity for your audio? And what quality setting to you have it set to? Just curious. I use Audacity for sound clips and put them into Camtasia Studio, and use Camtasia’s production process to produce files of different sound quality. Camtasia Studio even lets you listen to how the final output will sound before you actually produce each version.
I use audacity to record them, but I have a custom audio program to compress the audio as lossless as possible, each audio file is down to about 300kb-400kb average, but 102 files adds up, I did get it to 50MB for the 102 audio, but the 150mb is the max file size I was referring to.
I couldn’t figure out the best way to produce the audio poems, and make them downloadable as an album or a track, the music companies don’t really do for poetry like the do for music albums, so CDNOW…etc doesn’t give same options and too expensive.
Amazon Createspace would be great when I do a written volume, but I don’t know when I will get around to one.
I use Camtasia Studio too, but not typically for just audio files though I should test the compression and see how it comes out.Â
@Justin G: Sounds like your workin’ your sound files quite nicely already. Cool.
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Determined was he
Excess challenge a breeze
Memory filled with vast words
Ostentatious, no, but awesome to the absurd
Notorious of wonderment
Illogical to think any different
Cohorts sing his praise
Rumination, yes I’ll have another
Admonish, I could never do so to my CCC brother
Timidly, I fear one day, he’ll fail to come back.
Shane, you rock. That was swell!
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@Shane – look at you – another rhymin’ fool 🙂
@Mitch-I’ve said it before – I love your mind! 🙂
Thanks, Cathy!
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This was cool. I would’ve never thought of writing an acrostic.Â
Thanks, K. If you like that form, I have four more on my public Evernote notebook.
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I chaffed against this here poetry challenge:Â
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She was not illogical in her excessÂ
of confidence, she was steady strong andÂ
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hollow eyes, with colorless dismay.
Ostentatious with distaste.Â
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My ruminations of her take me away,Â
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@Jenn: Three cheers for chaffing! 😉 Great job here.
Nice one, Jen! The final verse was beautifully rendered.
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Jen, I don’t to maul your name when I record it, can you phonetically spell out our last name for me so that when I record it I don’t mess it up?
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Your poem has been read, I hope I did it justice http://soundcloud.com/dragonblogger/how-she-was-by-jennifer you can download a copy of the audio file with the button on top.
Yay. Yay… YAY!
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That was three cheers for the recording. I am so happy you’re doing this.
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You totally aced it
Glad you enjoyed it, I love reading poetry is just one of the things I enjoy doing. Â
I am loving this, Justin! 🙂
Jen-really, really excellent! Â
I like how it read like a miniature story.
The rumination of another time
A time we thought we knewÂ
What’s lost we cannot determine
As the ostentatious masks our shame
What once we embraced
We let go in illogical haste
Our memory a fading past
The cohorts of excess smile in triumph
As timidly we let them be
The notorious mock us
In an admonishing loss of faith.
@Justin-I always write 1st & read later so I just saw that you want a title…hmmm…
How about – Innocence LostÂ
Okay your lovely poem has been recorded and is here: http://soundcloud.com/dragonblogger/innocence-lost-poem-by-cathy you can download it with a button on the top and use it how you want, let me know what you think.
So very cool, Justin. Thank you.
Cathy and Justin, you both did something special with those words.
That was fun to read and listen to.
Cheers,
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@Cathy: AwesomeSauce
My first attempt at Shadora:
Memory
of outrageous
excess of
waste at the
ostentatious Roman feast –
so notorious!
The cohorts
are admonishing,
but they will
hush up and
timidly determine
on rumination.
@Briony: A must excellent first attempt at Shadora. Write on!
P.S. Thanks for the tweet. I”m trying to follow you, but Twitter currently thinks I”m following too many people to follow more. Once you hit the 2k follow count. I guess I have to have more people follow me before I can follow back. Sucks.
Loved the read, the flow was challenging so I tried 3x to get the flow right to where it sounded good to me.  It didn’t have a title, so I titled it Memory and I hope I pronounced your name right.  Listen to the recording here and you can download it from the top button http://soundcloud.com/dragonblogger/memory-poem-by-briony-coote
Man, this was hard, but it did test my skills. I tried.
Ostentatious disguises
Overwhelms me and surprises
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How anonymity shrouds society
Which people conform to its proprieties
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Derived from their prejudices, their admonishments are hypocritical
Cohorts and notorious enemies alike, cynical
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Zeroes and ones determine everyone’s identities
They enter a world where limitations freeze
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Some timidly reveal their names to friends
While many don’t hesitate to express their opinions and press send
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Technology rules in most aspects
But not as much as affluent connections
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Illogical verdicts rule in favor of the mastermind
No excessive punishments for people of their kind
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After some rumination if memory serves, this is the life line the world has given me
Where one’s influence determines the outcome; society’s key
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There is no truth
There is no proof
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Uncover the veil of lies obscured in anonymity and good name
And maybe things won’t remain the same
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Perhaps the minority will triumph over the majority
The small congregations will emerge from their spots with their heads held high, unswayed by the city
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This is no mystery
It’s time to re-right history
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@K: Outstanding! Nuff said!
K, As I am recording the poetry, is there a pen name or name you want me to read as the poem author? Â Also the poem could use a Title, I was thinking “No Memory” but let me know what you prefer.
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You slayed this challenge! This was … I am at a loss for words.
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*Swish!* No net!
EVERNOTE: A writer’s good friend. Since I was just telling K about the other poems in the acrostic form, I decided to quickly update the public notebook with the submission for #272.
Justin gave each of us the MP3, which I decided to paste to the end of the poem. Imagine my delight when it started playing as soon as I viewed the note!
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@Justin, I put up some links, including a picture that you use to link to poem #97. The picture, if anyone happens to click on it, will take them to your sales page. Let me know if this or any other link is okay or needs to be modified or deleted.
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@Everyone – Evernote rocks. Check out a small facet of its rockiness:
https://www.evernote.com/pub/anklebuster/creativecopychallenge-mitchellallen
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Really well done, would you mind linking to my homepage instead of my top 5 poems page for the “rest of my work though”. Â I don’t have my random twitter poems in my top five and they are always visible on my homepage.
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Reunion
Distracted by rumination
Blinded by excess
Determined to win the battle
Ostentatious in appearance
A notorious reputation
Admonishing glare freezes
Begger timidly retreats
Illogical past shared
Cohorts of the youth
A forgotten memory Â
Two worlds briefly reunite
@Lebbie: That was great. Wonderful flow to this one.
Enjoyed the poem Lebbie, here is the recording of it and you can download it from a button at the top http://soundcloud.com/dragonblogger/reunion-poem-by-lebbie let me know what you think.
I love poetry! Good job everyone. 🙂
Determine what you want out of life no matter how illogical it may seem,
Listening to your cohorts is the easiest way to crush your dreams.
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Dive into your memory and remember a time when you didn’t timidly go along with the crowd,
Rumination can be good for your soul and move you forward in life.
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Refuse to buy into what ostentatious people are selling because they could be full of hot air,
Seeking the approval of others is like excess drinking – it will kill you in the end.
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Don’t allow the notorious fear mongers in your life to talk you out of what’s best for you,
Sometimes, admonishing others is the only way to find your voice, to find freedom.
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@Rebecca: You realize don’t you, that now I don’t have to go out and buy that daily calendar item I was going to buy? 😉 Love ‘um.
Enjoyed this one Rebecca, hope you like my recording of it and remember you can download the recording by a button on the top http://soundcloud.com/dragonblogger/dont-listen-by-rebecca
Oh, I titled it “Don’t Listen” for you since you didn’t have a title.
I stared.
Damn his rumination;Â
couldn’t he determine,Â
wearer of that ostentatious wig,
an outcome?
I shrugged.
Illogical to expect witness memory
to make a difference;
The prosecutor’s cohorts
wanted blood today.
I sighed.Â
This was a case of excess;
Timidly, one of them rose to
Explain it all away:
It was a lie.
I smiled.
Notorious,
But finally uncovered,
His judge was not asleep;
An admonishing descended.
Well done Anthony, here is your recorded poem http://soundcloud.com/dragonblogger/judgement-poem-by-anthony let me know what you think and you can download it for your own copy with a button at the top.
@Anthony: Outstanding!
@ Shane… Lol! I have some that haven’t been published on the CCC. You’ll be missing out. 🙂
@ Justin… That was cool! Have you thought about doing voice over work? You have the voice for it.
Lol, I wish! Â I would love to be the voice of a CGI or animated character on a show. Â I don’t know if I would be good at it, and don’t even know how to get started. Â I don’t think I have a great voice, my NY accent is pretty thick and takes a finely crafted settings on my mixing board + mic + audacity clean up to get my voice just to sound the way it does in those poetry readings.
@ Justin… If you want to get started, you could hire a voice coach and check out the local casting agencies in your area. For example, Good Faith Casting in Phoenix, AZ is a fantastic casting agency, and they hire people for voice over work. You could make $1,000 or more for reading lines for a few hours. Not too shabby. 🙂
If you record anymore of the postings from the CCC challenge, you could always use them as samples.
I forgot about books on tapes. You could be the voice behind the best-sellers.
As I thought about this challenge, it occurred to me that I don’t know what poetry is, nor how to write it. So what better to keep things interesting, right? When I saw the word “illogical”, it made me think Spock on Star Trek. So here’s my attempt. Someone that understands poetry can tell me if lack of rhythm or rhyme rules this out of the category, or whether the formatting is a good enough fake! 😉
TRAPPED BY THE MOMENT
Excessive rumination is illogical, said Spock
I thought his cohorts detected an ostentatious hint
Scotty, notorious for speaking his mind, admonished him
But timidly because of how the others might abuse
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Spock raised an eyebrow at the comment, in usual fashion
and then clearly struggled to determine an answer
Confounded by his human side, he struggled too long
for now he had proven the point with his excess rumination
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I am not one to talk, I just write poetry without having any formal training in it. Â Poetry doesn’t have to rhyme, free verse is quite common. Â One of the things I love about poetry is you MAKE IT how you want. Â No rules, no reason, you just write.
I recorded your poem, and when read aloud it sounds like a poem to me, listen here:
http://soundcloud.com/dragonblogger/trapped-by-the-moment-a-poem Â
Wow Justin, I can’t believe how nice you made that sound. Seriously, novelists should be chasing you to do audiobook recordings. This was really just a few minutes of throwaway words to describe a thought, but when you read it, I really like it. That goes way past the sound of your voice. It’s something about “the way you handle the words” that makes it so good. You have a real talent. Thanks!
Btw, is it possible to download the mp3s from that site?Â
Thanks for the compliment, for all of the recordings for this contest I enabled the “download mp3” feature, you just see the button at the top of the recording that says “download”.
Only the ones for this contest are downloadable, so if you see the ones older that are my own poems, they don’t have that download button enabled.
My 20+ years of running Dungeons and Dragons Adventures being the DM Â and telling stories to my kids plus listening to dozens of audio books kind of give me the right sense of timing, inflection to add to voices when reading stories.
I don’t think I am that good at doing vocal work, don’t really like the sound of my own voice but I enjoy reading work aloud and am making a point to feature other poets and writers work as tribute. Â I have been doing it for other poets too not related to Creative Copy Challenge just for fun and sending them the link as well.Â
@Bobbert: That was a trip! Outstanding!